From c7f44916111c89d12d661c68e8d590e973f36820 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Andreas=20Sch=C3=A4rtl?= <andreas@schaertl.me>
Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2020 15:02:48 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] report: review abstract

---
 doc/report/abstract.tex | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/report/abstract.tex b/doc/report/abstract.tex
index 80ea582..0ec71e1 100644
--- a/doc/report/abstract.tex
+++ b/doc/report/abstract.tex
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ information is readily available for querying. \emph{ulo-storage} aims
 to lay out the groundwork to do just that. In this project, we
 collected various pieces of exported data into a centralized and
 efficient store, made that store available as a publicly available
-endpoint and then evaluated different ways of querying that
-store. Also, implementation of some suggested queries on top of this
-system resulted in insight on how a unified format for organizational
-mathematical knowledge could be extended.
+endpoint and then evaluated different ways of querying that store. In
+addition, implementation of some exemplary queries on top of the
+created infrastructure resulted in insight on how a unified format for
+organizational mathematical knowledge could be extended.
-- 
GitLab